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在托福写作中这些容易丢分的地方,你“踩雷”了吗?

2024-06-25 00:06:37来源:

  大家在托福写作中失分的多吗?是否知道考官扣分的点在哪呢?今天西安托福写作培训学校-新航道就给大家介绍一些在写作中容易丢分的地方。看看你有没有“踩雷”。

 

1、用词不当

学生们在新托福写作中或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题,但是要注意的是一些较较基本的错误是不能犯的。

举例:In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.

——problems应改为questions

2、拼写错误

这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的误打,而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。

举例: In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one,requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers.

——judgement应改为judgment

3、乱用大词

举例:First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.

这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题:

1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职,因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;

2)although和but是不能连用的;

3)指代不明,they不知道是指代前面的什么;

4、表达中式

举例:The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.

句子中划线部分的表达过于中式化。

5、表意重复

举例:They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.

前面已经提到了朋友,后面又提到朋友。

举例:The show is so compelling but attractive.

compelling和attractive是同义词,所以这里这么写就让人不明白。

6、固定用法错误

举例:To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.

——To some extends应改为To some extent

7、例证夸张

举例:For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.

虽然善意的谎言是必要的,但是其功效显然没有这么大。

8、成分多余

举例:According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.

该句中的shows that是多余的成分。

9、词性混乱

举例:However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.

句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private embarrassing。

10、时态错误

新托福写作一般使用现在时态,除了拿过去事件作为例子用过去时态。

举例:Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.

    以上就是给大家介绍的10个在托福写作中容易丢分的地方,希望对大家有帮助,如果您也正在进行托福备考,想要了解更多内容,想要老师为您系统的规划,欢迎联系下方的在线客服咨询,领取托福备考礼包。

 

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